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我们的润饰师能将您的论文修改得更清楚易懂,调换不恰当的词汇,也修改拼字与文法上的缺点。为了改进您稿件的组织性及清楚度,有须要时我们也会改变句子的次序。

期刊论文遇严重年夜修改或被拒绝的来由

 . Poor writing style and use of English
 . Subject of little novel interest or not generally applicable
 . Authors did not follow manuscript instructions
 . Poor quality supporting figures
 . Not enough contribution to field
 . Faulty methodology
 . Outside the scope of journal
 . Poor written discussion
 . Inadequate references
 . Title not representative of study

Poor writing style and use of English

%

Subject of little novel interest or not generally applicable

%

Authors did not follow manuscript instructions

%

Poor quality supporting figures

%

Not enough contribution to field  

%

以下是根据润饰和核阅员的考语,迫使期刊论文被请求修改或退件的英文写作缺点

. Redundancy
. Verb Tense
. Passive Voice Errors
. Weak Verbs
. Verb Agreement
. Omitting Comparisons
. Clear Pronouns
. Poor written discussion
. “It” and “There”
. Noun Verb issues

以上材料是从175问核阅员(Reviewer)及润饰们在三年时代的考语抽样而成的。每位作者的缺点会有所不合。

Redundancy

%

Verb Tense

%

Passive Voice Errors

%

Weak Verbs

%

Verb Agreement

%

我们修改文法,包含名词与动词应用的成绩(强势与弱势的动词、动词形状、动词/主词相通)、廓清朝名词、修改并删除冗词赘句。我们的润饰师也会建议可代替的词汇或是提示您将句子从主动语态改成主动语态。

我们的润饰师能将您的论文修改得更清楚易懂,调换不恰当的词汇,也修改拼字与文法上的缺点。为了改进您稿子的组织性及清楚度,有须要时我们也会改变句子的次序。我们将须要修改的部分清楚的标明出来供您参考,您可自行决定能否接收我们做的改变。

  • 主动语态修  - Voice corrections
  • 应用过量名词而非动词  - Noun to verb change corrections
  • 应用强势动词  - Creating strong verbs
  • 防止过度应用 - Avoid starting sentences with the words,"It" and "There"
  • 不清楚的代名词  - Use pronouns clearly (they, which, them, this, it, he, she, etc.)
  • 冗余和无用的词句  - Deleting redundancy and extra words (while maintaining the author’s meaning)
  • 动词时态变更  -  Verb tense change within a sentence
  • 不完全的对比比较  - Omitting comparisons
  • 主词和动词没法对应  -  Subject–verb agreement

 Voice corrections

主动语态修改主动语态修改

“Generally, I think you could improve the whole paper by using more active voice sentences. It will improve the flow and allow the reader to follow your meaning.” 1st Reviewer, Journal of Hydrology”

Original 原句

Identification of poor food, bad housing, inadequate hygiene and large families as the major causes of poverty was made by Jones (2005).

Modified 修改后

Jones (2005) identifies poor food, bad housing, inadequate hygiene and large families as the major causes of poverty.

Original 原句

Consideration of whether countries work well on cross-border issues such as immigration is undertaken by Raul (2007).

Modified 修改后

Raul (2007) considers whether countries work well on cross-border issues such as immigration.

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Noun to verb change corrections

应用过量名词而非动词

“It seems that many of your errors come from your using nouns instead of verbs. This makes your sentence longer because you need additional “meaningless” verbs to complete your sentences.” Associate Editor, Journal of Retailing

Original 原句

Enumeration of three reasons why the English language has become so important was made by Thompson (2006).

Modified 修改后

Thompson (2006) enumerates three reasons why the English language has become so important.

Original 原句

Discussion of the challenges and strategies for facilitation and promotion of ERP is performed by Smith (2007).

Modified 修改后

Smith (2007) discusses the challenges and strategies for facilitating and promoting ERP.

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Creating strong verbs

应用强势动词

“Another suggestion for your paper is to find a native editor to help you with your verb use. Strong verbs move sentences. Helping verbs often confuse the reader in your technical descriptions.”Reviewer, Journal of Technology Management

Original 原句

Smith (2003) asks the questions as to whether conventional methods are the best environment for execution.

Modified 修改后

Smith (2003) questions whether conventional methods are the best environment for execution.

Original 原句

Smith (2008) makes use of examples of these various techniques as evidence that innovation continues.

Modified 修改后

Rao (2008) uses examples of these various techniques as evidence that innovation continues.

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Avoid starting sentences with the words, “It” and “There”

防止过度应用”It” and “There.” 

Your sentences are too long, especially your methods section! Try cutting them into individual units of complete thought instead of stringing together thoughts without stopping for breath.”– Reviewer, Journal of Water Resource Management

Original 原句

It was vital that quantitative measures would usefully supplement and extend the qualitative analysis.

Modified 修改后

Quantitative measures must usefully supplement and extend qualitative analysis.

Original 原句

It is necessary that the best method to adopt for this investigation was to determined by the committee.

Modified 修改后

The committee must decide the best method to adopt for this investigation.

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Use pronouns clearly
(they, which, them, this, it, he, she, etc.)

不清楚的代名词

“Line 12 on page 3 of your paper is an example of your ongoing problem using pronouns clearly. There are at least 3 different nouns “it” could refer to. You must make your pronoun references clear!” -3rd Reviewer, IEEE Transactions on Advanced Packaging

Original 原句

A case study approach was chosen, this allowed a closer observation of a single specimen.

Modified 修改后

A case study approach was chosen to allow a closer observation of a single specimen.

Original 原句

In most recent studies, they measure X in four different ways.

Modified 修改后

In most recent studies, X is measured in four different ways.

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Deleting redundancy and extra words
(while maintaining the author’s meaning)

冗余和无用的词句

“The whole paper should be shorter. I am confident that you could say everything you need to in 30% less space.” – Reviewer, IEEE Journal of Engineering Management

Original 原句

It may be said that there are not fewer than one explanation which could this result.

Modified 修改后

There are several possible explanations for this result.

Original 原句

The current study was unable, insofar as we could determine, to analyze these variables.

Modified 修改后

The current study was unable to analyze these variables.

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 Verb tense change within a sentence

动词时态变更
“Your discussion section changes verb tense often. Sometimes you change several times within a sentence. It makes it difficult to understand what has been done and what you are still planning to do” – Reviewer, IEEE Signal Processing Letters

Original 原句

All studies described as using the X procedure are included in the analysis.

Modified 修改后

All studies described as using the X procedure were included in the analysis.

Original 原句

X will be synthesized using the same method that was detailed for Y, using CO2

Modified 修改后

X was synthesized using the same method that was detailed for Y, using CO2.

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Omitting comparisons

不完全的对比比较

“Line 20 of page 2 should read, ‘The finance department focuses on profits more than their department does.'” -1st Reviewer, Finance Review

Original 原句

Country A funds high tech innovation more than Country B.

Modified 修改后

Country A funds high tech innovation more than Country B does.

Original 原句

The device formulated in this experiment has higher luminance.

Modified 修改后

The device formulated in this experiment has higher luminance than conventional models.

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Subject-Verb Agreement

主词和动词没法对应

“Read the submission guidelines! English should be checked first! There are many basic errors that should have been corrected throughout this paper.” Reviewer, IEEE Transactions on Visualization and Computer Graphics

Original 原句

This paper seek to address the following questions:

Modified 修改后

This paper seeks to address the following questions:

Original 原句

However, there have been no controlled studies which compare difference in X and Y.

Modified 修改后

However, there have been no controlled studies which compare differences in X and Y.

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